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W. Arthur

Autor(a) de The Disciplined Male - Volume 1

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Perfect! It's a consensual and romantic Femdom Erotica that's also extremely harsh, and incorporates some serious action of discipline that are on par with non-consensual books of this kind. This is feat very difficult to achieve. But W. Arthur has done it here. Characters are built perfectly. There is an extremely interesting buildup and premise. Scenes are exciting. Only complain I would make is the book name. Because it doesn't do justice to such a marvelous book. W. Arthur should have come up with something more creative for this masterpiece. Tagging the character of Casey as 'Schoolteacher' is not very impressive. She is far stronger character than that. More like a drill sergeant! I will highly recommend this book to anyone interested in this genre.… (mais)
 
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |
Many stories start really well and then lose the momentum somewhere in the middle and bring forth a pathetic ending. This book has an entirely different issue. It includes a prologue that (maybe intentionally) delivered an entirely wrong idea about rest of the story. While the story is on the subject of an FLR involving a responsible and loving but a very strict dominant woman, the prologue gave the impression as if it's a non-consensual Femdom story of a man's subjugation by manipulation. But I won't say this idea is is bad. It's execution has gone wrong. Because right after the prologue, the initial chapters started building the man's character as a submissive and showing us his tendency towards accepting a dominant female for his partner. As these chapters felt conflicting with the prologue, we start getting confused whether we misunderstood the character during the prologue, or that's happening during those later chapters. But later on, this becomes a really good and exciting story. The dynamics between the two characters is really good. And the story flow is close to perfect. In my eyes this could be a pure masterpiece of FLR / Femdom involving Domestic Discipline if the initial chapters were handled properly. I just wish someday W. Arthur decide to revise the book and bring harmony in earlier chapters, or completely omit the prologue. But even in its current form this is a great read, and the best book of W. Arthur I've read on the subject. I will highly recommend this to everyone interested in this genre.… (mais)
 
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |
Worst of all the books of W. Arthur I've read written on the subject of Femdom. The whole premise of this story is absurd and boring, and is actually just a scenario to integrate lots of spanking scenes. Hence, there is not much of a story besides what's already told in the book description. A man goes to an unknown town by mistake where there is a whipping post. Then he's kept there forcefully, and he has to obey every female in town, otherwise he would be punished tied on the whipping post. And this is what happens in the book, and keeps happening. That's it! That's the whole book is about.

I would highly recommend skipping this story. W. Arthur has written many books worth reading. One of his work I've added in my list of femdom erotic masterpieces as well. So choose one of his better works instead.
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |
It's a good romantic story involving Femdom Domestic Discipline. It's just that the quantity of discipline scenes is negligible comparde to the length of the book. And first half of the book has literally nothing. Furthermore, the story had too much focus on Scott's 'desire' of being disciplined - something present in every story of W. Arthur. Having such a desire is not an issue. Numerous stories are written on the desires of Masochists and Submissives. But then the story flow is different in those stories. W. Arthur's stories do not properly match the concept. Because when someone has such a strong desire of something, they always find out the means to satisfy those desires. For example, in this story, why Scott never sought out a dominatrix or an alternative dating website for his 'desires'? He is smart man - a director of bank, and he seems to know about everything happening online. When someone desires something, the impact of that action is reduced by great margin. Scott desires discipline, so all the scenes are not exactly painful, and in a sense, not punishments. Hence, it doesn't matter in which setting and at what reason that activity happened, that activity becomes simply a sexual role-play. Furthermore, his life is not a mess in the beginning, as the story tries to tell.

Overall it's a good book, and worth reading. Consider it a general romance story between a couple having desires of Femdom Domestic Discipline.
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |

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