Brian Jay Corrigan

An interesting novel, a mix of literary style and elements of more popular fiction such as twists and turns, secrets (from the reader), and unexpected occurrences. I have been to a workshop on novel writing by the author, and I am sure he added those elements in order to increase suspense and keep the reader turning the pages.

I can’t discuss the gimmicks without disclosing plot. I do think they border on gimmicks, though, and I know that is a derogatory term, but that’s my opinion. I did feel manipulated and almost lied to at times, and part of that feeling is attributable to the fact that the author uses an omniscient viewpoint for about a third of the novel, and we are inside the head of some of the characters who are keeping secrets, without those secrets being revealed to the reader. Not as bad as lying to the reader, but I still felt manipulated by the time it was all over - not the pleasant reading experience the author intended, I think.

I still recommend it though, and I highly recommend Dr. Corrigan’s workshop and his book on writing the novel. He has some excellent insight into the novel that I have not seen elsewhere, especially on focus, narrative drive, and subordination.… (mais)