Helen Hardt

"Blood Wolf" by Helen Hardt

The first 95 pages of this novella Damien tries everything under the sun to mate with Suzanne. I mean literally--words, gifts, caresses you name it and he used the tactic. And three separate times he came just short of succeeding...until Suzanne's cousin Ashley interrupted with what has to be the worse sense of timing ever. It was almost like clockwork, the two would get to a certain part of their kissing and Ashley would knock on the door and demand to talk to Suzanne. Leaving poor Damien to take a cold shower.

Even though Damien is domineering, aggressive, possessive and probably just a step under 'insane' I think the fact that he tries to take it slow (and succeeds...sort of) endeared him to me. No doubt he came on really really strong--his first conversation with Suzanne was little better then “You. Me. Bed. Now”, but about halfway through seducing her he realizes he didn't even learn her name yet! It was those little things that made me like him instead of intense, passionate dislike.

Plus it was his discussion with Suzanne regarding his needing her while in wolf form kind of cracked me up.

The twist on being a werewolf was interesting, though since for the better part of the story no one has any true experience or knowledge of what a Blood Wolf is the facts got jumbled quite often. Damien and his adoptive father Dougal's relationship was really sweet and often hilarious. Dougal would ask something, Damien would shrug with no idea and then completely blindside him with some other comment. There was that genuine affection though.

The entire storyline with the vampires and the demon sort of worked, but the ending result left me supremely dissatisfied. Suffice to say that Ashley makes a questionable decision in regards to one of the vampires (given the history), the ending fight fizzles (literally) and there doesn't feel like anyone really paid for what almost happened.

In all however I left the story intrigued by the Blood Wolf mythos, interested to see what else could happen and still chuckling.

"My Lord Werewolf" by Ria Ellis

I don't want to say that I didn't like this story, because I did. Werewolf, curses, regency era, gothic overtones...there really wasn't anything in it for me not to like. Unfortunately it was just a little too...bland. My favorite parts were often the ones that are mocking gothic novels (in a good-natured way).

Cassandra was interesting enough, but wasn't terribly intriguing. At five-and-twenty she's a spinster, but content enough. Her Uncle is generous; she has friends, enjoys the ton lifestyle and really is only lacking a husband. Unfortunately she's known as the 'Cursed One' because she's been thrice betrothed and all three have wound up dead in some manner. We're given very brief recounting of each of these men and that's all. There doesn't seem to be any social backlash towards her at all.

Connor I didn't like much of the time. If he wasn't brooding about how unlucky his fate, he was busy feeling extreme guilt over an act from a decade ago as well as more recent incidents. He really isn't what you would call a terribly safe guy to be around. If he managed to forget his guilt for a little while, he moved onto all the reasons that Cassandra should never be around him. It grew tiresome after a while.

The ending, and the 'bad guy' revelation came out of left field. Not the romance part of course, but everything else. I'm still not entirely sure of the villain’s motivations (something about being robbed of his rightful place generations ago?) or with how Connor's dangerous presence was resolved. I'm still convinced that's he's dangerous.

Of the two I definitely enjoyed the first story, Blood Wolf, more than the second story. It had a more appealing premise and mythos to it, while My Lord Werewolf felt rather standard and predictable.… (mais)

To be honest, 3 stars feels really generous to me for this book. I never got into the writing style the author had. Like at all. We have two characters who are polar opposites and really don't belong together that it feels like we forced together. In fact, most of the initial interactions just feel like an assault we are saying isn't because this is erotica. The dynamic between the two doesn't read as romantic to me at all. Honestly the book felt very much like a wanna be 50 Shades fan fic. Talon is an unlikable character the entire book, but it's supposed to be okay and forgivable because he has a tortured past. It's not okay... also some heads up somewhere in the book about the details of this past would have been nice as they come out of nowhere and are unpleasant.
I read the book excited for an erotica romance and I have to say I was really disappointed in the writing of the scenes. It just didn't fit right. The wording of things really took me out of the moment and made it hard to enjoy the story. The two characters are so predictable it hurts. Jade is instantly in love with Talon the first time they sleep together; and he's just trying to get her out of his system. I just could not enjoy this story at all. Even when I wanted to. The last few chapters when we learn the Steel family has some hidden secrets all feel rushed and like they could have been explored a bit more if we had cut out some of the surplus scenes between Jade and Talon that didn't add to the story. Even though the book ends on a terrific cliffhanger... I have no desire to continue the series at this point.… (mais)