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Dawn Ireland

Autor(a) de Love's Guardian

7 Works 52 Membros 2 Críticas

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Dawn Ireland is clearly talented. The story line is good. Alex and Declan are well-developed characters who provide some decent dialogue. Believe me, the potential is there.

My primary issue with this book is that the author does not transition well from one character's viewpoint to the other. I can't tell you how many occasions I've found that the story jumped from Alex's point of view to Declan's point of view without a page break or a string of symbols (such as three *** in the middle of a paragraph break). Instead of a proper break, it just abruptly changes "voices"/POV and it's annoying!!!! How did this escape the editor's notice???

I just don't think I'll keep this book.
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caslater83 | 1 outra crítica | Nov 12, 2016 |
This book was okay, I liked the heroine, but I didn't really care for the hero. The story was good, but I didn't like how the hero couldn't admit his love for Alex. That got annoying. Also, author needs to work on transitions, rooms and characters change with no warning, feels like something is missing in the story.
 
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Amanda.Richardson | 1 outra crítica | Jul 23, 2013 |

Estatísticas

Obras
7
Membros
52
Popularidade
#307,430
Avaliação
2.9
Críticas
2
ISBN
4

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