Mary Rundle

First of all, this was a fun read as long as you were not looking for a literary work Secondly, I am past ready for this series to end, but it is clear it is not. Start to wrap up one thing and two more are introduced. While fun, the entire series reads like a teen, pop drama - full of teenage-style emotional angst, that appears with outbursts and then disappears in a hot minute. Love is instant and solves all. There are now way too many characters networked in and what is with the nicknames?
Almost every character has a nickname or code name. There are over 30 main characters with two names each. So annoying and the holes - such as when Smokey aka Golden Sun aka Gabriel Hamilton "realized Norm was a master Dom, who could easily keep him on edge." Umm hello? Norm who is 19 or so? spent 5 years in a cage? That Norm? The one who, we are later told, received verbal lessons on how to Dom from his guardian? Don't mind me - I am just so annoyed to find myself liking this and at the same time pissed off with the style and gaps.… (mais)