story concept 3 stars, writing, presentation & editing 1.5- 2 stars.

This is the 2nd book I've read from this author - they were both tamer then my normal reads, almost on the cozy side of contemporary romance, (no explicit sex scenes, love conquers all, HEA with marriage and babies), she does like to swear in the stories, but its so much like the way I speak that I almost didn't take notice of it.
Sebastian had a hard road to transverse to get to his HEA, but he made it in one piece. His supportive family, and Raelynn helped him piece his life back together really quickly. Sebastian had a much better developed character then our heroine Raelynn, that could be because we had met him in the first book (Henry). It would have be nice to know more about Raelynn, other then she was a cop, and had a family,and friends; knowledge about her was hidden behind her work. The brotherly interaction is so real, and down to earth.

I have discovered that although the story lines are ok the presentation of even this 2nd book is as poor as the first book. The book has lots of incorrect word tenses, missing words in sentences, and uneven flow. The book is in need of a loving touch by an person(s) who can edit, provide constructive criticism, & polish.

The preview of the 3rd book - Quinn, seems to have some glaring no no issues ie: male and female work colleagues being roomed together on a business trip by their boss, Airport security doing a strip search of a passenger in a room with his female business colleague present - complete with spread the buttocks...i don't object to these in a story but they are just so unrealistic as presented by the author I think that I will now give up on the series, I gave it two books to pull itself together and fix its over-sites.
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