I didn't like it at all. The story is weird. The writing is stilted. No connection to the characters.
I didn't catch any editing errors. ( )

This was a short that took only about half hour or so to read. It is a beautiful story that held my attention. I cried a bit. I smiled some. It was like meeting someone and hearing their story over coffee. You don't know the person well but you find yourself invested in them. I don't want to spoil the story because it is so short, so it is about Keira and David. They had been together when they were young and 30 years later, fate brings them together again. ( )