I found this story to be terribly confusing. There wasn't ever a good exposition. The transitions were very quick, and not very fluid. While I enjoyed Lex Nova, his character, and his style of speech I didn't feel he was well used. The killer vampire clown family was a wonderful device, but again, I never truly felt it was explained what they were doing and how.

I feel like this story needed more editing so it could be clearer... ( )