Lia Davis

I feel kinda like this was a short story rather than a book. We really didn't get a feel for who Mattie and Julie are. Then all these other characters are thrown in and they're either fast friends or flames or enemies and know who Mattie is ..all while we know nothing.
I also got the feeling that this was written about a 22-year-old and they just changed it to be 45 because it doesn't really fit but that could also be because we didn't really get much of a backstory.
It was a good start though and interesting.… (mais)

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Genres: Book Rejected
1 Star

Quite frankly, I am mystified by all the 4 & 5 star reviews.

Whelp, I know I won't be reading any more of this series.

This book was....
Highly Repetitive.
Jumpy Scenes.....
& filled with a large variety of every type of editing errors.

It seems like the author couldn't decide where they wanted to go with the story, nor how to get there.

There are contradictions and large information gaps.

The romance and action is tenuous. Insubstantial. Flimsy.

With the high rating I thought it would be a decent read.
I was wrong.

I will repeat, I am Mystified by all the 4 & 5 star reviews!!!!!
One of the few times GR reviews let me down.… (mais)