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A carregar... Afraid to Flypor L. A. Witt
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Pertence a SérieAnchor Point (2)
Fiction.
Romance.
LGBTQIA+ (Fiction.)
HTML: Once a fearless fighter pilot, Commander Travis Wilson is now confined to a desk. It's been eight years since the near-fatal crash that grounded him, and it still rules his life thanks to relentless back pain. Lieutenant Commander Clint Fraser almost drowned in a bottle after a highly classified catastrophe while piloting a drone. His downward spiral cost him his marriage and kids, but he's sober now and getting his life back on track. He's traded drones for a desk, and he's determined to reconcile with his kids and navigate the choppy waters of PTSD. Clint has been on Travis's radar ever since he transferred to Anchor Point. When Clint comes out to his colleagues, it's a disaster, but there's a silver lining: now that Travis knows Clint is into men, the chemistry between them explodes. It's all fun and games until emotions get involved. Clint's never been in love with a man before. Travis has, and a decade later, that tragic ending still haunts him. Clint needs to coax him past his fear of crashing and burning again, or their love will be grounded before takeoff. .Não foram encontradas descrições de bibliotecas. |
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 Google Books — A carregar...GénerosSistema Decimal de Melvil (DDC)813.6Literature English (North America) American fiction 21st CenturyAvaliaçãoMédia: (3.45)
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Usually I can start a review by clicking the star rating, but I'm not sure what it will be this time. I have to write first. While there's nothing wrong with the plot, or the characters as such, there are several things wrong with the writer's choices. Repetition is a big problem, not just some phrases, but identical ones when they're supposed to be in separate people's heads - that's just lazy writing/editing. Repeating laundry lists of reasons and stresses and I mean, I was tired of it by the middle of this book. It didn't stop. From both characters. I remember his story, dammit, and his, stop repeating it! I GOT IT ALREADY.
*clears throat*
So that's insulting, to this reader. And it's confusing. The first book, Just Drive, had some of these issues, but it wasn't this bad. What happened? One careful edit pass could've fixed all of the problems, though it would've made a shorter book. Shorter but better is BETTER. I wish it had been better. But I was relived to get to the epilogue, and that's just sad.
1 star for plot, 1 for characters, and 1 because I could finish it. Minus 2 for the reasons above. *sigh* (