A really short story, only 22 pages, where the sex has a great share of it. Erick is a young executive in a factory; he made his path from the bottom, working on the line, and the same did Willis. Willis is Erick's forbidden dream, the colleague that plays in Erick's dreams every night, and the reason why Erick doesn't mind to work overtime. But there is only a game of glances between them, Erick never had the courage to speak for real to him, and so he jumps to the chance to be away on business for four days with Willis, in the same hotel room.

No more I can say since the story is pretty much here. Maybe I can add that the story is very explicit, the sex is fast and ready without too much frills... it's a very manly way to approach it, and it's right, since both the author that the two characters are men. There is also a good component of self-esteem, despite Erick being shy in revealing his feelings to Willis, he is not unaware of his qualities, one of them being an handsome guy. But there is not wooing, no jumping around the main argument, that is two men and a bed.

It's not the first time that I read this author, and I had the same feeling as before (a feeling I had also for some other authors of whom I read only short stories...): I would like to have the chance to taste them with something longer, maybe not a full novel, but at least something more than two/three scenes.

http://elisa-rolle.livejournal.com/497598.html

My favorite Thom Jaymes story so far! ( )